Mechanically Creative and Creatively Mechanic Since 2011
Posted by Emma, who’s fooling around with things.
A friend posted this image, and I absolutely love it. It’s the perfect example of how to avoid passive voice, which is something I struggle with when writing.
“She was killed [by zombies.]” (Passive voice.)
“Zombies killed [by zombies] her.” (Active voice.)
“It was determined by the committee that the report was
inconclusive [by zombies].” (Passive voice.)
“We were invited [by
our neighbours zombies] to attend their party.” (Passive voice.)
“I felt like I was dying [by zombies], and that was a hell of a lot more painful than flat-out being dead [by zombies].” (Taken from my book REBEL. I’m just having fun here. 😀 )